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| Satan'z Myth 2008-04-09 ch 13,  | abuseLovely story..but it ended a little too abruptly. I assume that since Sean had stopped going to lunch with his friends, he'd ignore their homophobia, and go ahead with it..and if he does like Leo back, he'd do something about it. Well, I hope so !! Besides that..*fumes* don't you simply hate homophobic people ? They think that the only way to be "normal" is to be like them. So what if someone if not straight - does that make them abnormal? And, you picked up things like gay people being beaten up - and that was really good! Cheers to you..I liked the story a whole lot - very well written ! :) |
| Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis... 2008-03-28 ch 13, | abusecute~ |
| BloodstainedSunday'sBest 2008-03-16 ch 13, | abuseoowah that was awesome! and really super cute much love :] |
| Gun 2 the Heart 2008-03-03 ch 13, | abuseamazingly cute. I love it throughout the whole time =) |
| AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 ch 13, | abuseYay for a happy ending! |
| AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 ch 11, | abuseIf I die I shall haunt you for the rest of your days, reminding you how it was your fault that I didn’t get laid. Best. Lines. Ever. |
| AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 ch 9, | abuseXD Love the ending of this chap.! |
| AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 ch 8, | abuse*love* (still) Is this story complete. It probably says somewhere but I'm too lazy to look. ^^ |
| AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 ch 5, | abuseYay! I'm revived! Thank god. Now I can keep reading your story! XD God that was sorta corny. lol. |
| AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 ch 3, | abuse*squee* It's so CUTE! *dies* |
| dominic+leo 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusei'm getting ready to read your story. it sounds good, really it does. i have to print it b/c computer screens really hurt my eyes. too bright. i wish i could just kill them all with a giant 8 foot pink flamingo, but alas i can't. oh well. back to your story. i promise to review to hole entire thing when i'm done. in the mean time have a uber giant double chip cookie and a glass of milk.^-^ |
| CrayonMentality 2007-12-29 ch 13, | abuseThis story is adorable. I wish Sean would make up his mind though. |
| Love Eternally 2007-12-24 ch 13, | abusethis story was so incredibly cute |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-01 ch 13, | abuseAW! *Sparkly eyes* THAT WAS SO CUTE! *Eh hem* Yes. I'm good. They're adorable ^^ And Sean's a sweetie :P Love this a lot! |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-12-01 ch 12, | abuseYay for them! XD Hehe. Aw, I bet they'll end up together :P They're too cute. |