 Deaths.Last.Prayer 2009-08-26 . chapter 13I really like this story and I do hope you decide to update it some day. |
 frolic-horror 2009-05-26 . chapter 13Aw... such a cute story... Is it really complete? No epilogue? Anyway... I'm gonna die by fluff |
 neeree 2009-02-25 . chapter 13wait...that's it? That was the last chapter...? so Sean doesn't come out? etc etc...
Well... it was still good. But I feel like its kinda incomplete.
Also...when Sean comes over and then stays the night you say that the next morning is a sunday...and you mention church etc. But it was actually saturday according to the story line. Just thought you should know. Also one of the early chapters still has the notes from the editor/beta. You should fix that, it gets confusing reading them when your trying to focus on the story.
Overall, it was good. i enjoyed it. Especially Leo's personality, the whole need to speak his mind, but still being a cry baby. It was cute and it worked. |
 CherryLover 2008-08-01 . chapter 1I think this is a really great story! Thanks so much for writing this, I enjoyed reading it so much. I hope you'll write more in the future! Keep up the good work. 8D |
 WrittenSound 2008-08-01 . chapter 13But... THAT'S NOT AN ENDING! Please! Gimmee ONE more chapter! Or a sequal! A sequal would be nice... I need to know if they DATE! Or if Sean like... I dont know, COMES OUT, or something!! Is he bi? Or is he gay? I need to know what happens next PLEASE! Pretty please? With whip cream, chocolate syrup, hot fudge, spinkles, a cherry and everything else that is fantabulous on top of ice cream? I needs it BAD! I'm now addicted to this, seriously, heart-wrenchingly, tear-jerkingly, ADDICTED! A-D-D-I-C-T-E-D! PLEASE! Relieve my pain and write a fit conclusion! |
 iCorpseGringer 2008-07-05 . chapter 13I really loved this story but the ending kind of made me go... "thats it?"
Its just me though because it was really great but i hate ambiguous endings... They just make me want more...
Anyways amazing story!
I tried picturing Leo with his hair cut but i couldn't.
Keep wring awesome stories.
-Diana |
 iCorpseGringer 2008-07-03 . chapter 8Sorry I've been reading and i don't remember if i even reviewed your sorry. So again very sorry for that. I really love your story and think its amazing. :] please do keep writing. |
 Daydream Nation 2008-06-01 . chapter 13That was so, so irresistibly adorable. ;P |
 Satan'z Myth 2008-04-09 . chapter 13Lovely story..but it ended a little too abruptly. I assume that since Sean had stopped going to lunch with his friends, he'd ignore their homophobia, and go ahead with it..and if he does like Leo back, he'd do something about it. Well, I hope so !! Besides that..*fumes* don't you simply hate homophobic people ? They think that the only way to be "normal" is to be like them. So what if someone if not straight - does that make them abnormal? And, you picked up things like gay people being beaten up - and that was really good! Cheers to you..I liked the story a whole lot - very well written ! :) |
 Sasquatch 2008-03-28 . chapter 13cute~ |
 The Ouch 2008-03-16 . chapter 13oowah that was awesome! and really super cute
much love :] |
 Gun 2 the Heart 2008-03-03 . chapter 13amazingly cute. I love it throughout the whole time =) |
 AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 . chapter 13Yay for a happy ending! |
 AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 . chapter 11If I die I shall haunt you for the rest of your days, reminding you how it was your fault that I didn’t get laid.
Best. Lines. Ever. |
 AmorphousHeart 2008-02-22 . chapter 9XD Love the ending of this chap.! |