I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! IT'S VERY, LET'S JUST SAY IT MADE ME CRY

i can't believe a mother would do that on purpose!! but oh well, not all mothers are perfect..but i really LOVE LOVE LOVE this story...haha, please do make the next chap!! thx!!

Wow! Brilliant chapter; it was good to hear from Ian again. But ah, you're making me wish that I hadn't given up basketball! Incredible job describing the game - I was just as nervous as I get when I watch the real thing. Good development and everything... the Marie bit was a bit of a surprise, but it was really good. I'd never honestly considered what her mother/sister were going through/thinking. Hope to see the next chapter soonish!

-Bloody Penhand

yeah! you finally updated and this chapter is getting tense. i really love this and i cannot to read the next chapters!

Her mother is horrible! And I still still still don't like Ian. I don't know why, but I just can't seem to. I read your profile now, glad to hear you don't know the end yet :D

But... where have you been? I've been trying to talk to you... anyways, awesome chapter, can't wait to see more! (and believe me, summers do nothing to help writing!)

o this story is so cool I really like it. Though I like Seth a lot, I kind of hope she ends up with Ian. It's hard to choose! I think Seth is more of like best friend material than boyfriend. I don't know.

Hrm... you know... I think I'm being swayed to Ian. Really... he's... normal, you know? Seth lives in this horrible little richie like world that I think wouldn't be right for Lena, no matter how good she is at it.

Also... though I'm not sure whether Lena did or not, in California it is now illeagal to talk on a cell phone that's hand-held. It has to be a handless device, and only once you're 18. If you're not over 18, then you can't talk at all, even with a handless device. This all became law on July first..

Hrm... Lena needs to make up her mind though. And your writing is getting very good, I really enjoy it. Oh! And in March, it's not necessarily hot... it did rain one day in late March in CA so... don't assume the typical stuff. Unless of course you're in southern CA.. then it's even hotter!

Good update... more coming soon, I hope!

realli good story and i really want to read more.

is it almost done or is it done? lol

can't wait to read more =D

This story's getting pretty deep - nice work. I liked how you brought back the social status aspect this chapter, how it's so different from how it was in the beginning. And I'm glad we finally heard from Ian again... I was beginning to wonder what happened to him! Great writing, great ideas. Bring back Mike soon! A half brother...
-Bloody Penhand

A brother? A BROTHER? What on Earth are you thinking?!
Haha, I thought that this was brilliantly written. I can see things starting to come together, though nothing seems really set yet. I really liked Lena's subtle transformation of character. Oh, and welcome back. :)

It's alive! You're alive! So many things are returning from the dead I wonder how I'll survive it all...

Anyways, so Seth is rich and truly has grown up with all this. That must have been hard... and Seth has a brother, who's cuter than Seth? Oh jeez. This next chapter is going to be crazy. I like Lena's hair and dress, amazing detail you have there!

So... I shall be waiting for said next crazy amazing chapter! Keep up the wonderful work.

Hey Nisha! I love your story, you make me want to write again despite being pwned by Tuba xD
I hope you can finish it soon! Go Nisha go!

That was a very sweet chapter. I really like Scott's character, and I think you're capturing fair track experiences. It was a lot less intense than the previous chapter, but that's a good thing (rise and fall of action, and so on). I liked the part where you mentioned "double-o-seven **" as well as the sex change part.

On the whole, I liked it, though I'm expecting Ian to be in the next one more, okay? It feels like you're... building up to something. Keep it up, and may your ideas come to you frequently and unsegmented.

-Bloody Penhand

great chapter cant wait for more!

This is great! It's a great story. I';ve read all the chapters so far today. It's amazing.

-- Tied-Up Dog