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| Max Radio 2007-04-21 ch 8,  | abuseDon't worry, if you smoke pot, you'll get laid :). "good god what happened to my story" is the greatest way to start any eighth chapter, and not to mention the head part at the end. So anyway, WHEN WILL HE FIGHT TAI PAI LEE? I wonder if the playgirl issue will be a success. |
| Max Radio 2007-02-08 ch 7, | abuseJohn Lennon doesn't need to rise up! Sean Lennon can! |
| Max Radio 2007-02-08 ch 6, | abuseYup, the typos have definitely become part of your style. And that was a really long chapter title. And nail polish remover makes me sneeze. |
| Max Radio 2006-10-05 ch 5, | abuseUnfortunately Clinton's never going to shut up, and Vader enjoys being called '**' (believe me, I KNOW) so yeah. And Hell freezes over all the time. God, Slayers is like the dumbest anime on the planet. |
| Max Radio 2006-09-28 ch 4, | abuseFINALLY. JEEZUS. I HAVE BEEN WAITING OUT MY DAYS FOR THIS. Okay, the kool aid man was great, even though it was A STLEN PLOT!11!! (dun dun DUN.) Rocky Balboa should get a montage in this. Montages are fun. I can't wait for 5 |
| Max Radio 2006-08-10 ch 3, | abuseIsn't Tai Pai Lee a Chinese name? Same problems as the other chapter. I wonder if you've ever read 'Bridge of Birds' by Barry Hughart? You sound like the kind of person who would like it. (It's a novel, not on this site) |
| Max Radio 2006-08-10 ch 2, | abuseAgain, funny! The typos annoy me though. So did the shortness. Yes. Will continue reading, sorry that it's been a month. |
| Max Radio 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuse...Fascinating. No, seriously, this is kind of funny... |