Reviews for sunburned and loving it

Aquafied 2006-06-19 ch 1,	abusehah i dont have a boati have a surfboard and grey water
boys kiss girls 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abusethis is so sweet! odd. okay, I have to share this with you. For some reason I associate Abel with both summer and Coheed and Cambria. Coheed and Cambria's Blood Red Summer just came on and it made me realize how much I miss him... why? Why do I miss him? I don't know. This is a rad poem though. I love the last two stanzas the best. They complete it. =D
breezy nostrils 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abusesounds like paradise in sunny california. hehe. nice work with this piece. love the imagery and feeling i got from this. and summer is here! haha (it's my fave season)
Chandra-Moon 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseUpbeat, positive...an interesting, hopeful piece that is both poetic and realistic in its dreams.
ode to a firefly 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abusesigh Wish my summer would begin, you know, sometime BEFORE DECEMBER! =\ Yes, I'm feeling sorry for myself. Beautiful poem. I love the line "fingers tracing through the river spray." It creates such vivid pictures in the reader's mind. I'd give it, oh...4.99 stars. =P ♥Christine