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| ShadowedTears 2007-05-14 ch 1,   | I think the poem is good except that you are posting his "deepest darkest secret" on the net. You dont hide the "secret" very well and if someone read it who knew you both wouldnt that be like betraying him. Unless he knew you wrote it and put it on here of course...? |
| White is a Sin 2006-07-09 ch 1, | Thanks for the reviews. ^_^ Tred to get back sooner. I like it, a bit confusing, but i like it. |
| Out-Of-Reality 2006-07-02 ch 1, | The message is expressed easily and your story told but the rhtyhm or emotion wasn't exactly expressed as well. I liked it and it's good you can express yourself. Good Stuff... |
| lordelfy 2006-06-28 ch 1, | this is a sad tale, but it seems as if all tales are sad these days. nice write. |
| Night Gypsy 2006-06-26 ch 1, | nice, i believe that if you truly love someone, you'll help them and love them no matter what. I like IT! :) |
| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2006-06-26 ch 1, | I like it. It's simple and true. What else can I say. Keep writing. Constance |
| Amalia Jagd 2006-06-18 ch 1, | i wouldnt exactly classify this under love, of course, correct me if im wrong, but you never revealed what the secret was. i wouldnt know what to classify it as. but i dont see love in this poem exactly.otherwise, GREAT job on this work! |