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| Flaming Jello 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseTo say that I loved this story would be an understatement. I am mush in your hand- to do with as you please. I love Joseph!! He's the perfect character. Not that i don't love Ash- cuz I really related to him- I just like Mr.Dark-and-mysterious better. I'm going to read more of your stories to drool some more. Thanks for the great read! |
| Lovedward48 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love Chloe! We need more charas like her. I think I'd have strangled her a long time ago if she did that to me. I can understand Joseph but he didn't help the matter either. I guess Ash is the normal character. But still CHLOE ROCKS! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA^^ |
| etherealrain 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseHIlarious! I like chloe..and joseph's reaction to chloe they can get married and make a happy little threesome family (with chloe as the asexual cuddle buddy) 0_0 |
| Lady E 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is a delightful one-shot and absolutely -should- be kept up on this site. :) Thoroughly adorable and fluffy all the way through, a fun and relaxing read perfect for the end of the day. The conversations between Chloe and Ash are refreshingly funny, and Chloe herself is really quite a character. As you said, the dialogue is what drives the story, and there are quite a few memorable lines. "You **" had me laughing - it's lovely to see Ash's tight, rational, carefully polite control cracking. |
| Jishu26 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseBWAHAHAHAHAH~! I'd die if I have a "bestfriend" like Chloe XD;; |
| Soul's Eclipse 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseVery awkwardly cute. Love it. |
| Jenny Hatter 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is so undeniably cute I want to hug it. Seriously. I don't care. I'll hug my computer if I can't hug it.Oh gosh. You know what? I'm even doing that right now. Such a cute one-shot. I adore Chloe. She's undeniably cute too. Best wishes on fictionpress, Valentine Satiguss =) |
| Switch 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseHey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^ |
| toboe059 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abusecool. u should make a sequel ^_^ |
| firestar267 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. So funny and sweet, amazingly written and really enjoyable to read, well done. |
| Kidiu Anaji 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseHeheh, really good! Just a really great ending! |
| Somniorum 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat O-S, funny, cool. |
| Amerez 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseso sweet! I liked the dialog style thingy...and your characters, they're always so adorable. |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abusehehe...funny ^.^ |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseAH! this was so cute! you need sequal! yes that's what you need! AH! it was so cute. |