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| David J. Bloch 2006-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis one is pretty awesome. It reminds me so much of a friend of mine too ^.^;; |
| Mikki Amboree 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. You portrayed the agony of the speaker wonderfully. =) |
| GreenBinderGirl 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really good. Very nice and rather sad ^^ I liked it. |
| Aurora Spiderdust 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and sad. A little choppy here and there, but overall it's excellent. I especially liked the lines: "I won't break hearts to get you. / There will be no 'you and me'." Good job! |