XDD I just love the title of this right now. "Goodbye Wong" Ahahahahaha!!

But, seriously, I think you should go for simple. This sounds very much like a song, especially with the chorus. So on that note I propose the name "Not Coming Home" because it sounds like a good song name ^.^;

Very good. Very powerful.

I wish I could think of more to say, but it's like three in the morning. >__>

It sounds just like a real song performed by a band...To the tune in my mind, anyways. If you think that it needs a better title, perhaps you should change it to "My Soul is Screaming". I liked that particular line.