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| CiaoBellaxx 2007-02-05 ch 1,  | abusei love this. its beautiful and so so sad... heart-breaking really. but i love it. |
| My Sweetheart the Drunk 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, this is so beautiful the imagery is amazing, and using formatting to make your point or to add to the picture is completely genius. loved it! |
| free-to-dream15 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseWell first of all, I've got to say that I've been out of town so that has been why it has taken me so long to read (and the fact that I finally have two more chapters to the sequel lol) so I'm sorry but now I can read! This was absolutly amazing!! I don't even know what to say!! Literally took my breath away lol |
| Rutoh-Chan 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, a very nice poem. I like it. I like how you made it poetic without rhyming. It's one of my favorite styles of poetry, but I notice lots of people tend to stick to rhyming. Power to free verse. You did excelent work with it. |
| special 2006-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh wow. that was beautiful. "crying overthe tiredness of the wind" "rewinding the sins painted on your skin" lovely. lovely. lovely. keep up the great work. ;)allie |
| LEDlorien7 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abusewow, this poem is so beautiful. I love the way you write poetry, i love it. I don't quite understand it, i think it would take many readings for it to be clear. But i love the metaphors anyway. I like that i don't understand all of it. it's a good thing. |
| andXso SheXpulled theXTrigg... 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI'm totally speechless. I couldn't possibly say anything that would do it justice. Amazing doesn't even begin to cover it. ~j. lynn |
| Hell's first Icicle 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abusebrilliant. amazing. i love it. so much.*shakes head* i've never been good with words, so i don't quite know how to convey how wonderful i found this... "somehow you always make me feellike Bambi on ice""(All that was left was anechoinglonelyi …)""until I’m left in tatterswith just the jokers to cling to" ...it's perfect. |
| Autumn Dance 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI have a headache form crying over this so much. It's beyond me to describe. I guess the fact that I just sobbed reading it might. It's heartwrenching. So beautiful. I can't begin to tell you... |