paints a beautiful picture in my mind.

Great first chapter. I'm intrigued and excited to keep reading :)

very striking. I love the alliteration in the first line.

another brilliant one, really dark...I'm going to put these on my favourites.

London..haha I know the feeling...all of these poems are amazing, even though each one is so short... (i'm jealous!) keep writing x

This is gorgeous (I wish I'd written it , lol) the language is beautiful and its the best short piece I've read in ages.
Lizzie x

I like the last one.
It reminds me of something.

I am quite fond of it all actually.

I love the idea of a crashing happiness... short and wonderful

Those last two lines are amazing... nice alliteration also

i like this one a lot. this boy i don't know, his eyes seem honey-colored.

i really enjoy the way you write.
you get so much across in so few words. x

love your collection. such pretty images in such small amounts of word. perfect :)

Striking, i loved the first line, a very different start.

I'm so glad I started coming back to this site. Nothing is more inspiring than looking into another person's soul, and there is no better mirror to the soul than poetry. And your work is striking to say the least.

I love how you can take a few simple lines and make them earth-shatteringly profound and totally juvenile all at the same time. Every line is a fragment of a thought, yet this seems to be some sort of Morrison-esque type of philosophy all by itself.

Beautiful. I can't wait to see more.

_till tonight do us part

I love how archipelago starts of, almost recounting the lyrics of all the songs I used to overdo as a kid -- pina coladas dancing in the rain, bittersweet symphony, with or without you. and then, the pieces only get better from there.
great work.