this just makes me go YAY

I ADORRE THIS!
so cute, and i really like the length(:

It's 12:05 at night and I almost sqealed loud enough to wake everyone up and hurt my jaw trying to be quiet! That last line of ben's had to be one of the sweetest ever!

I LOVE IT! :)

Amazing! It was great how you wrote a detailed story, and it seemed as though everyone was a well rounded character, but it wasn't too long (I would have loved more) and it wasn't boring by any means. And there were lots of funny moments. Great job!

Ah, so cute! And quite amusing. Especially loved Tim and George. Heh. I greatly enjoyed reading about Ben and Jacob's relationship, and their quirky neighbours. Ben was just such a sweetie...well, Jacob was, too. Totally meant for each other. I also am quite fond of Spot. Loved it!

I loved it! Very, very, very cute. Wonderfully done.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

That was so cute and sweet and wonderful. I think it made my day.

Really sweet :D At first it seemed like an Edward/Jacob slash fanfiction in disguise, but then I'm like...this is way awesomer. Although there was a moment of "did they seriously name the werewolf jacob?" I loved it. And I don't usually go for the fantasy stuff either. AWESOME.

Oh my gosh that was so adorable ueskjfhksjfhshjsfhjs I am grinning from ear to ear now! Oh and by the way, sorry for the flood of alerts I'm spamming you with. I'm going to be stalking through your writing, its definitely very addicting! :)

Loved it !!

I really liked it! Your characterizations are particularly wonderful, not just relating to their varying degrees of in-human existence. But the parts showing Ben's continual obsession with his exes particularly stuck out as wonderful, and made the characters very interesting to read about.

Thanks for sharing!

THAT WAS WAS SO SWEET!

and awesome lol.

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Aww! I love this story! Ths summayr is so cool!! And the world in which everybody knows thereis avmpires is really neat!!
Lee

I absolutely love this story! Supernatural romances usually tend to lean one way or another, which yours did towards romance, but it worked for you. Your characters were well-developed and self-explanatory, you didn't waste any time or space trying to explain them. Their actions proved their personalities. The plot was simple and sweet, and the world you created was both unique and believable. I think you should write a sequel, actually, with maybe one of Ben's exes showing up. Maybe David, having gotten himself in trouble, and expects Ben to help him. That would be interesting. Thanks so much for writing this, it's truly a masterpiece!