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| ZionsAflame 2006-09-26 ch 1,   | wow...i mean wow...I have chapter two up as well so you need to read it. Thanks!! |
| Coco Kintner 2006-07-25 ch 1, | Wow, that was trully amazing talent. Great job! I just have to add you to my favorites now. |
| Mienaku 2006-06-29 ch 1, | "Kiss me, kill me; give me at least one lie…" Gr...how do you do it?*jealous* |
| Dragons Willow 2006-06-24 ch 1, | awesome! sweet! dramatic! tragic! depressing! lovely! dark! dreamy! . . . running out of adjectives here!! *runs 4 thesaurus*the imagery is just awesome!! everytime i c a puddle now i'll b looking 4 a ribbon! at first i thought i luved the first stanza, and then the second stole me, and the last line just blew me away!! i must say, and no offense, but this is one of the best u've had in awhile!! luv them all, but this one made a movie! . . in my head!! kisses and pickles! ~(^o^)~ |
| poisonbunny 2006-06-21 ch 1, | Gotta love that last line. *evil smile* Reminds me of blood . . . and blood is good. "More so than the shadow of a dream . . . A hope I thought I lived for" How often have I felt this way myself? So true . . . *sigh* |
| sunshineofyourlife 2006-06-20 ch 1, | RAIN!! hehe. is the old man snoring? |
| Femme de Dieu 2006-06-19 ch 1, | This is really mesmerizing. I've read it several times. Of course, I love rainstorms, and they do evoke memories of things we left behind, The wind does seem easier to hold onto than some of the people in our lives. But my favorite line was this:"Kiss me, kill me; give me at least one lie…" Yes, ANYthing except nothing, right? Beautful, O/DF. I do enjoy your work very much...T/P |