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Rehy
2006-06-23
ch 1,
-sobs- That was sad -sobs some more-

Lapotorus

P.S. that really happened?
Black and White Dreams
2006-06-20
ch 1,
Oh. The last few lines really hit hard. M.B. would be Matt, right? Well, I agree with Lizz. I think you're heartsick. It's important to admitt it when you're in pain about something like that. Beautiful job. Love it.

angel953
2006-06-20
ch 1,
aw. i think you are a bit hearsick. (even if you won't admit it). about M.B. i presume.!? he he he ha ha ha. sorry had to get that out. anyway good job though.
Shara G.
2006-06-19
ch 1,
Very cool, I can relate! This guy who I don't care about anymore thinks I still do. I've moved on, his loss. LOL. I really like how you structured this poem, seems simple but has full of meaning. Great job with this, and thanks for sharing!
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