Reviews for Waiters and Boyfriends

laughter at the funeral 2006-12-10 ch 1,	wow...i dont think it needs that much of constructive crticism...i actually think its great...i just think there is something wrong with the line "(or maybe just not charge for her coffee)-"...i think "may not charge her for her coffee" would be better...or not...just an opinion...(grins)...but you did a really good job... truly yours...
your scripted romance 2006-06-22 ch 1,	that's cute, I liked it. oh, coffeeshop romances. I like how you did it from the guy's point of view. It was creative, and I wouldn't have thought of it.