Loved every word, one of the best poems I've ever read.

no matter how pretty the words are, the concept is what matters. & yours is new & ingenius; i love it!

can i ask what the o's are about? is that part of what got screwed up in the format? (stupid fictionpress.)

thank you for the kind words about my poem.

Interesting idea... :) I like this!

My favourite lines are:If this time turns out too perfectly,

I’m afraid that I’ll never see you

o-again.

YaY!

I like this! Interesting concept... but I have a question. Did you mean to write "I'll" instead of "I'm" in the third to last line? Also, are the "o"s supposed to be pronounced? Just wondering.

.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.