 poetic abortion 2006-06-27 . chapter 1I always pitied the poor girl, Cassandra; oh, she made me weepy the whole afternoon after we had read a loose interputation of the Illiad (I think, it may have actually been the real thing - score!).
I love this; it shows the irony and spite and hurt and betrayl and pure spitefulness of her (as I tak her) and makes her into living flesh. It is beyond lovely.
~* Noelle |
 emmathree 2006-06-22 . chapter 1I disagree with whoever the person experiencing multiple deaths is.
Don't touch it, it sounds forced with the archaic words.
Oh, and beautiful work, as always. |
 TwinDeath 2006-06-20 . chapter 1this is good, but i think it would flow better with old english. ("shall" instead of "will", "thy", "thee", ect.) Live Forever, or Die trying!! |
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