Oy. Very dreamlike quality to this, and the story behind is... creepy. =D Good job.

Maranwe Telrunya

Oh God.

This was orgasmic.

OHMYGOD, squee. **, squee because this has everything that I adore and everything that make me feel so, so dirty (God, incest is such a guiltypleasure, reading-wise). I love it, it is eerie and bittersweet and betrayed, so betrayed.

I love it. I love it. I love it.

Soprecousand**edup.

~* Noelle

sex with daddy?

oh dear.

i like the poem, though...

ooh I really liked this! wow, such a neat pattern of writing and an interesting piece! I really liked this line: "Cloaking Myrrh in stars and velvet black to hide her from her father’s gaze"