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Reviews For: Pandora
Maranwe Telrunya 2006-09-19 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. It made me chuckle. Good job...

=D Maranwe Telrunya
teh tarik 2006-07-11 . chapter 1
such simple innocent words - and yet such a dark theme. lovely contrast
poetic abortion 2006-06-24 . chapter 1
i love it.

the tone is so fairy-tale like and innocent and child-ish and amazingly naive and - that ending rips you from your seat and leaves you thinking that the world has stopped spinning. itissotrue.

~* Noelle
citrus scented 2006-06-24 . chapter 1
intresting thoughts, very. neat little poem aswell.
emmathree 2006-06-22 . chapter 1
I like this one because it's very short and breif and doesn't give you anytime to get lost between the lines.
The Postscript 2006-06-19 . chapter 1
Interesting, and yet no where you mention hope. Keep writing, s.
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