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| funky-gg 2008-11-25 ch 6,   | i love it! Landon is so cool! |
| Quiescent Darkfire 2007-02-05 ch 3, | OMG! I can't believe I've never reviewed this story. I must've read it a long time ago and forgot to review. Ahh, stupid me. Anyway, I love this story! I really like Conan. He reminds me too much of Kyon, the protagonist from the Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya. Sarcastic characters are the best! And I also love Landon for his calmness. |
| phelps112 2006-12-08 ch 4, | umm... fyi calling a guy heiss(sorry don't have an international keyboard) means he's gay. This is why you would never say ich bin heiss, bc that's saying i am gay. suss works(cute) but i'm not sure what hott would be. |
| Love-Always-and-Forever 2006-12-08 ch 6, | I really like this story. You are doing a great job with it. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! |
| Faye 2006-12-08 ch 6, | o I likes it! |
| Misty Nite 2006-11-27 ch 6, | Excellent story so far! My favorite character is definitely Landon! Keep up the EXCELLENT work! |
| Jugglingbearperformer 2006-11-26 ch 6, | YAY! You updated! Or I'm just really late...lol Excellent chapter..man tht underwear part was funny. My fav. character has to be Landon!! hehe Update soon! |
| me 2006-11-21 ch 6, | aw! that's so cute... Poor Corey, sick all day long. |
| lil the she-devil 2006-11-14 ch 1, | just wanted to tell u that ur story is kool. a few mistakes and problems, but other than that, it's good. good job, k? |
| Olivine 2006-11-11 ch 6, | i love Super Smash Bros. Melee. awesome game. im always pikachu, because i used to like pokemon, and thats the only thing i can control. i can beat pretty much anyone with the little yellow mouse, anyways. i also love landon (theres my favorite character). i love his name, i love his personality, his attitude, everything. that guy just cracks me up, lol. hes so casual about things, like at the end when her skirt was all bunched up. hey, at least he told her it was, you know? keep on writing and update soon. --Ss. |
| SirScott 2006-11-11 ch 6, | Great chapter, I hate throwing up, so I felt for Corey. Landon is by far my favorite character. Even is name is cool. ~SirScott |
| imames 2006-11-10 ch 6, | Nice update! My favorite character is Landon, because he's awesome. Nah, I think there's much more to him than meets the eye and I can't wait to find out more about him. And I totally agree with Corey on skirts; pants are MUCH more effective. Update soon, if you can! |
| Janina 2006-11-10 ch 6, | Hey you changed the german sentences, sounds pretty good now ;-). I like your new chapter. |
| Octello 2006-11-09 ch 6, | (laugh) This was a hilarious chapter! Especially the part: "You eat like a pig." "Thanks for the compliment." |
| yonderwindow 2006-11-09 ch 6, | nice job, update soon. |