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| super happy nuclear girl 2007-06-13 ch 1,  | abusethis made my toes tingle. pretty. when you described dream i thought of devendra bandhart, and... wow. 'ivory man', i like that. it makes me think of sleep, which makes me think of dreams. which is good. surreal. i like this a lot. |
| Big Eyes And Under Fed 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. You are extremely talented. All I can think of to say is "beautiful," but I'm not even sure that's enough. That was just about the best thing I've read in a very long time. |
| virginia giselle 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was so well written. Your metaphors and imagery were absolutely beautiful. The story confused me a bit the first time, but upon re-reading it, I understood. It was so beautiful, it baffles me. Splendid! ^_^ |
| KageNeko 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseits cute i like it. Good job ^^ |
| Rhapsody's Shadow 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseare you shure your not on drugs while you write these? I love it, dont get me wrong on that but, were do you come up with this |
| xanthofile 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuse:in awe: how could you write that and not get as lost as i felt? i'm still...so lost, and yet, dreamy. it's a vague feeling, anyway. infinity. heh. how come snow is the only one with a more tangible name? just a thought. can't really say how much i liked this, but i'm going to have to read it several times just to get it. ^^ |
| multiples of six 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseWoohoo for three-way gay sex! hehe, not really. But Dream didn't seem human. All of them were kind of ethereal. But yeah. And yeah. =) |
| SerialXLain 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseAh, cool. The story itself had a dreamlike feel to it...exotic or something. And Dream and Snow sound like sexy bastards. XD It was all really poetic and just pretty...Great story, dear. Love xoxoxoabcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz Oh and just because I've been saying this a lot in my reviews to you lately: Sex. |
| Shadow 3013 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuse*swoons* -So- pretty. I absolutely love this style; I love writing it, and I love reading it, though yours is the best example I've found in a long time. Really, really nice one-shot. |