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Reviews For: Your Deathly Kiss

MyAlmostLover
2006-06-28
ch 1,
abuseoh, marvellous rhyming. 'A million heartbeats cramped in a second' great description. carousels and candyfloss in the same line is pure
laughter at the funeral
2006-06-23
ch 1,
abuseyou have talent in creating wonderful imagery...good job...

truly yours...
Let It Rain
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuseExcellent. The imagery was amazing. Keep it up!
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