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| MyAlmostLover 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseoh, marvellous rhyming. 'A million heartbeats cramped in a second' great description. carousels and candyfloss in the same line is pure |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseyou have talent in creating wonderful imagery...good job... truly yours... |
| Let It Rain 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. The imagery was amazing. Keep it up! |