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| Caecilia 2008-07-17 ch 1,   | This was so good! It sure is heart-breaking, but it makes for an amazing story! I like the Italian in it. I think that you might want to go back and edit this piece some, like you might want to change 'lowered mty sword' to 'lowered my sword'. I loved 'Please don’t use those words.I won’t be able to stand it if he did. Those words, no matter if it’s in Italian or plain English. Don’t use those words.' I really liked this, good writing and good descriptions. *for the Beer Run, at the Roadhouse-link in my profile* ~Caecilia |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-30 ch 1, | Sweet story. I enjoyed that it was short and the sad but sort of happy ending. Nice work. Keep writing! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Oyoa 2007-12-16 ch 1, | Angels and vampires... hm.. this is a different spin that I would have never thought of. You always hear of mortals and vampires. But why not Angles and vampires! And this is the first time I've heard of it, she has to KILL him!... ... Hmm... I could start a story about a fallen angel. She became a fallen because of the usual reason: she fell in love. But the only difference: she fell in love with a vampire. Ah, I wish I can write that one day! Is it cheesy to say you inspire me? *laughs* |
| Black and Bleeding Rose 2007-01-28 ch 1, | I love the story. Sad that she had to kill him though. It would be cool if you did some kind of sequel to it though it might take away from the ending. Love it! |
| Deviliscious 2006-10-01 ch 1, | Oh...this is sad. But in the end, everyone wants to die in the arms of their beloved, no? Bad author, you! Killing him like that! -sighs- But the ending was beautiful for some weird inexplicable reason. Oh well ^_^;; |
| Escritora de Tormenta 2006-06-20 ch 1, | I've always loved mixing languages. It makes the story interesting and also serves as a memory aid. Largo puede su narración hermosa del amor viva en los corazones de sus lectores! |