Beautifully written. Very sad and deep piece.

I wish I had someone like that in my life.

This is well spoken and written, beautifully done.

This is AWESOME! dunno why,but its awesome!

Beautiful. Sad. Deep. Well written.

the first stanza has a good rhythm to it, but after that, the beat always seems a few stresses out of place. This also seems to go on and on forever with any end; you start off with one topic and end up with something different. The idea seems a bit clished as well. Sorry, but I just didn't like this a whole lot.

this was good... but at the same...sad... I like it! ]