so simple yet so stuning, excellent job

OMG aw, I totally love this poem, it is so adorablely sweet!

it feels like something is missing. maybe between the first two lines and the last one? i dunno, maybe it's supposed to be that way cos the title. . . i'm not sure, but either way, i think i like it. it's well done, really interesting. . . and i like the last line.