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| leo the llama 2006-10-29 ch 8,  | abusewoo! we need to play pool more... yer so mean to your characters!! GAH! *attacks* |
| merrymowmow 2006-09-10 ch 7, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update ' The Gray Area' |
| anon 2006-08-14 ch 7, anon. | abuseoh jeez! i missed an update! i've been out of town the last few weeks... damion and cain are freaky guys...but they're really neat too! sorry i cant leave more of a review, but your writing was great as always and i can't wait for the next update! |
| leo the llama 2006-08-08 ch 7, | abuseo thats a nifty poem! and i like damon. and i want to know about this tale. and fye!! WOO! it is now 1AM and i am too tired to piece together a longer strand of coherant thought... YAY FOR YOU WRITING AGAIN! --leo |
| anon 2006-07-17 ch 6, anon. | abuseAAH! you cant leave me off on so many cliffhangers...nicoli knew joshua? what happened to him? is he still alive? what is the creature? please tell me it was that girl that grabbed nicoloi's arm and not something else...holy damn girl, your writing is really cool. please update soon!! |
| anon 2006-07-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseoops, i think i spelled that woman's name wrong in my review... joanna. i don't, i'm sleepy. sorry |
| anon 2006-07-09 ch 5, anon. | abusegirl, that cain guy is creepy. i feel bad for seth being stuck in that elevator with him... it was amusing how shawn and aaryn got lost though. i think i laughed aloud when you wrote charles had a spatula...but with all these crazy people that are supposed to be somewhere, i hope he finds something more useful... those dogs are determined... who's the purple eyed person? hayden is cool...but seth is blind now? that's bad... is jeanna evil and why is cain working with her? SO MANY QUESTIONS!your writing style is amazing by the way... update soon... |
| leo the llama 2006-07-07 ch 5, | abusecain is an associate of shrapnel? oh dear, this is not going to be good, it is? what does joanna want with nic? i dont trust her. joanna is close to leanna. bad. GAH! write more... |
| anon 2006-07-02 ch 4, anon. | abusecain is awesome! freaky and twisted, but cool nonetheless. but poor hayden... i love how all the guys kept missing each other. that was funnyupdate soon!! |
| anon 2006-06-28 ch 3, anon. | abusepoor nicoli...first his condition and then that dog...hounds of hell was a good title.awesomely written otherwise. that village is CREEPY.haha seth and hayden are funny together tooanyway UPDATE SOON. you cant leave me hanging like this... |
| anon 2006-06-28 ch 2, anon. | abuseAH! this nicoli guy rules. and shawn too. and all the others. your characters are really cool. and now this kid...i love how you go back and forth with all your characters. it seems to make it flow better.on to the next chapter! |
| leo the llama 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseWOO!! now i can read yer writing any time i want! *latches on to guys* bwahaha you should put some other stories up here too *nod* i love yer writing --leo |
| anon 2006-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abusegirl, that was really cool! kinda long, but really well written. only suggestion i have is that you may want to go back through there and put dividers between the sections you have. it's kinda confusing all squished together. otherwise, really awesome. hope you update soon |