ok officially deep. very deep.

OMG did that really happen? I hope not. Oh my gosh that is so wrong and very sad.

good story so far... u should continue... update soon...

I really like your writing. The story itself is saddening but I guess when your writing about a girl getting rapped, thats what your aiming for so good job. The only part I didn't like was the start. Like the first paragraph or two, it like it just jumps right into the swing of things much too soon. Slow the pace down just a little

i liked it keep writing its good good detail