This story has been nominated for a 2007 Fiction Award- Favorite Villain: Keltha from The Black Book by Dante S. Acrutio.

That's deep. So I have killed and have been killed many times already. Love and review me please.

wow... great story... my only advice is that you avoid using the same words in each paragraph... other than that it was amazing!

I haven't started reading yet... but I must point out a mistake in the introduction... according to the Bible killing is not unforgivable... you can be forgiven for murder... it's suicide that is unforgiveable and that's because you can't ask forgiveness for it... I'll probably write another review after reading everything!

There were a lot of fragments (but I don't think I'm one to talk.) But it suited a prologue-or an introduction, whatever you prefer- and fit well with the concept.

The idea of adding a definition of 'kill' was interesting but if you even edit, in my opinion, 'kill' should be bolded or italicized. It just seems more fitting.

This is honestly a captivating prologue (introduction, whatever) so I hope the rest lives up to my expectations.

Whoa...

ok,I've only read your first chapter but I'm already really interested. It sounds very professional the way you've started this out, like the beginning of a movie or something. THe way your write is exactly the kind of thing that I like to read. By the way, thanks for reviewing my story. (PS: I love your pen name.)

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goddamn i dig these stories keep em up and i'll keep reading em SIT ON THE DAMN FLOOR! sorry still laughing about that from the last chapter...

wow...i actually caught the message in there, very well done

's a great fic. Do write more

I really like the introduction. It was really good. Very compelling and very true.

This was a refreshing read of horror/supernatural. Definitely takes the cake of originality and the details decribing the enviroment was very...compelling.I'm wondering if you know how to keep readers interested by using their curiosity? lolz

Man...that is creepy...but makes for a good read, I'll give ya that.

Wha...what's going on here? Whose journal is this, anyway?

At any rate, kind of freaky, the way this guy is just spiraling into insanity. I like how he starts forgetting the dates, that's a good way of showing him losing his mind. I want to know what all the Xs are.

Well, that was definitely a shock there, with the words written in his wife's blood and all. Quite a creepy chapter, all in all, if a bit short.

One thing I thought was kind of ridiculous, though, was Stan's wondering if the creepy, cloaked stranger in his house is a burglar. Maybe it's just me, but wouldn't it be kind of obvious that the guy wasn't a burglar?