Very nice. I did enjoy this.

Carey

(Thank you for your review of Six Years Since. Yes, it is a true poem, written for my grandmother who passed away six years ago. She was my life, my heart, and I was missing her badly last night when I wrote the poem. I tried to make the poem shorter, but it just didn't work for me. Thank you for the honest, constructive feedback. :P)

AWESOME!

That was really really unique! I loved it! Could see, feel.. everything! Awesome! Great job! :D

And such fun it was to read.

The essence of summer encompassed your words.

Too bad my summer is ending. :(

Wonderful job!

;)allie

Beautiful. It automatically relaxed me when I read it. NICE!

it was fun to read, too. it makes me smile even just to look at, and the way the words all just flow together makes for a very pleasant poem. it sounds exactly the summertime and i like how you wrote it. somehow it makes me think of a slushee for some odd reason, but slushees are good, so it works. awesome job. also, thanks for the review, and sorry it took so long to return it.

Salt spray scented kisses-ah, that is so cute.

this whole thing, makes me smileits that nice kind of springiness without overbearing tackiness

OMG! i dont even know wat to say! this is absolutely BRILL! jeez, i cant even describe how much i loved this. :D LOL. but seriously, this is awesome and was such fun to read. DEFINITELY going on my favs,

mez

Lovely - the simplicity of it works really well. Nice rhythm too.

Minimalist. That's the word I was looking for. It's lovely, really nice.

Beautiful last line. :D Keep writing!

This is SO fantastic- I Love it!The whole Idea is skitzy but perfect. Just aimless fun with words in the sun! It really creates vivid images in your mind...well done!Love Autumn x x x

Wonderful, it makes my winter day!

Melanie