ahh this is too awesome.i was laughing hard at the end of "gay robber in my kitchen". chantelle is funny. are you any of these characters? or like do any of these represent how you see someone else? this is definately the start of something beautiful.

funny.. write more.

Hahaha! Evan sounds like a right moody bastard...Jess sounds like a girl, but seems to be a bloke...and Chantelle seems like she's a blonde..is she? Arrgh, sorry stereotypes..

It's a really funny first chapter, update soon!

I'm not sure where it's going either...But, I like it so far and thus, shall await the next chapter.