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Reviews For: Jason and Colleen
I Adore Linear Regression 2007-12-21 . chapter 1
gAh that's wonderful. Lovely story.
Let It Rain 2006-06-21 . chapter 1
Sad, very sad. I liked the ending a lot. As for improvements, make sure you put the comma inside parenthesis.

Great job!
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