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| twirling flags 2006-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseI love how this speaks volumes in so few words. I imagined someone dying young and leaving another behind, or even passing away of old age. I thought, at first, that it was about an abusive relationship, but then I read the title and thought, "Someone died." Anyway, this is beautifully written. Thanks for the reviews. I'm glad someone can use what I say about camp to imagine theyre at camp. Does that make sense? Keep writing such beautiful works. I look forward to reading more... -Heart |
| artisresistance 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is short and precise, pinpointing and depicting the layers of pain. Nicely done in few words! :D I particularly liked the last three lines of it. Thanks for revieweing my story, I'll be back in your zone checking your work :D Gbye! :D |