wow! now i know why this is being published = )

i like it

good job

Nicely written and rather evocative but once more, mistakes:

INCOMPLETE not uncomplete!

'Run away' not 'runaway'

And I'm really not sure about the line 'Time can bring down the poor, the rich, and the normal' - probably should just be 'the normal' to keep the continuity of the poem.

Overall, though, a nice piece of work. And I wouldn't mind working as a beta if you'd like me to.

well written and so true...keep it up