Reviews for The Mystery of Time

lordelfy 2006-09-26 ch 1,	abusewow! now i know why this is being published = )
unspecified 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abusei like it good job
Marinus 2006-06-22 ch 1,	abuseNicely written and rather evocative but once more, mistakes: INCOMPLETE not uncomplete! 'Run away' not 'runaway' And I'm really not sure about the line 'Time can bring down the poor, the rich, and the normal' - probably should just be 'the normal' to keep the continuity of the poem. Overall, though, a nice piece of work. And I wouldn't mind working as a beta if you'd like me to.
FuzzyWriter 2006-06-21 ch 1,	abusewell written and so true...keep it up