 Kavita Najim 2006-10-06 . chapter 1The imagery is beautiful! I love the ribbons part.
Peace, Jess |
 blindinglight08 2006-08-12 . chapter 1this is amazing! its beautifully painful. i love it. |
 xTempestx 2006-07-29 . chapter 1lovely poem. i like the repetition of lines. |
 hyperactivegoddess15 2006-07-24 . chapter 1i really liked this poem! it had a lot of feeling and expression in it
just a suggestion, you could consider writing fiction for a change, not that your poems are bad :) |
 Leaving Here 2006-07-20 . chapter 1its sweet and slighy GREAT!
~Liz |
 me 2006-06-26 . chapter 1 I like this one a lot. |
 method acting 2006-06-25 . chapter 1I liked the summary, and I think you should have stuck with that mindset rather than go 'cup of poison' on me. I really like the ribbon bit though. File it under angst, but it's nicely written. Good job. |
 Love-and- Lust 2006-06-22 . chapter 1i like this alot, and thatks for the review |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-06-21 . chapter 1This has a very lyrical song-like quality that really enhances the flow. Well done. |