|Reviews for Notice|
| Kavita Najim 10/6/06 . chapter 1
The imagery is beautiful! I love the ribbons part.
| blindinglight08 8/12/06 . chapter 1
this is amazing! its beautifully painful. i love it.
| xTempestx 7/29/06 . chapter 1
lovely poem. i like the repetition of lines.
| hyperactivegoddess15 7/24/06 . chapter 1
i really liked this poem! it had a lot of feeling and expression in it
just a suggestion, you could consider writing fiction for a change, not that your poems are bad :)
| Leaving Here 7/20/06 . chapter 1
its sweet and slighy GREAT!
| me 6/26/06 . chapter 1
I like this one a lot.
| method acting 6/25/06 . chapter 1
I liked the summary, and I think you should have stuck with that mindset rather than go 'cup of poison' on me. I really like the ribbon bit though. File it under angst, but it's nicely written. Good job.
| Love-and- Lust 6/22/06 . chapter 1
i like this alot, and thatks for the review
| Moondog Dozier 6/21/06 . chapter 1
This has a very lyrical song-like quality that really enhances the flow. Well done.