The imagery is beautiful! I love the ribbons part.

Peace, Jess

this is amazing! its beautifully painful. i love it.

lovely poem. i like the repetition of lines.

i really liked this poem! it had a lot of feeling and expression in it

just a suggestion, you could consider writing fiction for a change, not that your poems are bad :)

its sweet and slighy GREAT!

~Liz

I like this one a lot.

I liked the summary, and I think you should have stuck with that mindset rather than go 'cup of poison' on me. I really like the ribbon bit though. File it under angst, but it's nicely written. Good job.

i like this alot, and thatks for the review

This has a very lyrical song-like quality that really enhances the flow. Well done.