Aw! This one is adorable! I like the theme of questions you have in there and your rhyming scheme. I think that this poem is well written and very accurate for a large variety of people. We always want our friends to remain with us

Aw another great poem so keep up the good work. Its a shame about the formatting, I often have trouble with it not working *grumble*. Did you write this poem with anyone imparticular in mind?

i love it and quite a bit is true for me and my friends

This was really good. It reminded me of the person that used to be my best friend, who would have said yes to all of it a couple years ago. Though now he's married and I'll never see him again...but yeah, great poem. You did really well at touching MY emotions, at least.

Wow, ths is truly an amazing poem. It really had movement to it. You really know how to keep somebody intersted and keep reading...good job and keep up the work