You are very adept at expressing your views and thoughts in a pleasing-to-read manner. Lovely.

um poemwise not that good 5/10 but messagewise 7/10 I like it

great poem as usual. u r such a talanted writter! u should consider sending them into a publisher. you could have your own poetry book. looking forward to ur upcoming works!

Mr. Magic

The Church is exclusive.

Exclusively for sinners. Others need not apply.

This is well written. You make your point well.

So true...so very true. There really isnt much room for interpretation on this one, which is somethign that Ive come to love about your poetry, but the message sort of punches you in the face as per your usual writing style.

this must have been the 4th time i said it, but WRITE MORE GODDAMNIT! (i thought the god would be approproate)

I whole-heartedly agree. This is a wonderful poem - very well written, and I love the formatting.

However, I do wish that, in your author's notes, you would stop stating how displeased you are with your poems. You are a wonderful author, and you have no reason to doubt yourself. =)

♥Christine

this was alright, really philosophical it seemed at some parts... like having a conversation. you did good with it.

All hail His Noodly Goodness! j/k...

Erm, anyway, Great poem once again. I think you will never fail to amaze me with your poetry. It is so rich and real. You can't stop thinking about it. Wonderful job again!

The last line really brings the message home. Everyone expects you to do as they do and believe as they believe. But, really, what if you don't?

~Krys