I've tried to write about this feeling before, but it never really comes out the way I want it to. Actually, they come out somewhat like this. Somewhat.
I like the concept a lot, and, for that, I like the poem, but it's definately not one of my favourites. Though I don't expect it to be- you wrote it a year and a half ago.

Despite all that, I am basically in love with this line;
"When did you loving me put extra baggage on my shoulders?"

In my opinion, it captures the feeling perfectly.
That hurt and confusion and sadness you're feeling because you do care about this person, but not in the way they care about you anymore. You don't know when things changed and a part of you really wishes that they hadn't, but they have and now him loving you feels more like an annoyance than a love. And you hate that, and you don't want to hurt him but you've got to end things, but how can you break a heart softly?
Ugh, sorry, I'm ranting. It's just that that's what I'm feeling at the moment. My boyfriend...yeah, you get it, I assume.

-Devin

I hunt down short poems. good. :p. to true, you don't seem 13. you seem older. no offence meant.

Short poems are always as good as long poems. The shorter ones sometimes hold more meaning and are to the point. Longer ones hold the same meaning just with some sugar. Lol i wonder if you even got what i said. Umm but i really liked this poem. Your writing style has changed since the first few poems you posted and i will say it has changed for the better! Not that your writing was bad before;it was good, but now it is even better!

It was concise, and I liked it. In the fourth line from the bottom, "brake" should be "break."

Here's your review you little beggar:I hate that feeling! But you've put it to words well. I especially like "When did you loving me put extra baggage on my shoulders?", great line.~T

I like this poem it's very good!

i like how this peom seems like your thinking out loud, well... in the computer. I LIKE!

I liked it. I'm the "him" in this scenario for a particular friendship. I think I needed to read this to remember to look beyond myself. Thank you

OMG I CAN SO REALATE TO THIS ONE!! I

i like it. its simple and short but has great meaning. i love the last line...truly heartfelt.