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justanotherlurker 2008-08-28 ch 7, anon.	abuseI love Rachel! Seriously, she's just like one of my friends. I met her (my friend, not Rachel...seeing as Rachel's fictional, I have not met her) because she jumped on one of my friends and kissed him, explaining that it was a beautiful day. She didn't know who he was, but apparently she was in the mood. And you don't really care about my personal life.
Cay 2008-08-21 ch 7, anon.	abuseI really like the start to this story I hoe it gets finished
Quinty 2008-06-30 ch 7,	abuseI'm glad Michael left the party. I would have done the same, parties are just... meh. I hope you update soon! I love this story ^_^
Quinty 2008-06-30 ch 6,	abusexD Rachel is being a bit of a stalker! I loved the little flashback with Michael, Emily, and Amanda xD Too bad Emily had to move. And Michael's first party?? This should be interesting!
Quinty 2008-06-30 ch 5,	abuseHa! Stoner cheerleader xD I probably wouldn't have taken her serious either. I actually kind of like her though... for now. I like tofu! But when it's in soup, not so much by itself.
Quinty 2008-06-30 ch 4,	abusehahaa Kara killed Lucas' tarantula xD I don't blame her though... spiders are disgusting. I did like his name though, it was interesting xD I love Lucas! hehe. Off to read more!
Quinty 2008-06-30 ch 3,	abuseSorry for the pause in my reviews! I like Lucas' mom. She's sweet ^_^
Quinty 2008-06-29 ch 2,	abuseI think it's an interesting idea to make Michael lack of emotion. I could tell by the way you wrote the first chapter! I thought it was great :) I was so sad that peter didn't survive :( But maybe now Michael and Lucas will be friends?!
Quinty 2008-06-29 ch 1,	abuseI saw you had reviewed me a while ago and I wanted to return the favor! I love it already! It's different than what I've read lately. I love Michael's subtle humor xD I'm going to continue!
Tinkering 2008-06-27 ch 7,	abuse...I like how he is slowly slipping towards being BAD :) It is very interesting to read... That was pretty harsh that his uncle died and I wonder when it will really catch up with him... Really awesome story!
magalina 2008-05-20 ch 7,	abuseBonding time? :D I'm glad you updated~ Sorry it took me forever to review!
Flaming Jello 2008-05-01 ch 7,	abuseWow! This story is amazing. o.O I love it and I really hope something big happens soon. Your plot is awesome but in the recent chapters, its been getting a little slow. Or fast- I can't really tell. ^~^ But it IS great and I cant wait until next chapter. Please update soon.
Kyuuketsuki-Yaoi Fan- 2008-03-26 ch 7,	abuseI Think You Should Make Somthing Happen...Or At Least... Um Well It Feels Like Nothings Happen 'Ya Know? Any Whoodles Update Soon
-Iaabi'SabeL 2008-03-20 ch 7,	abuseI would have gone and reviewed the previous chapters one by one, but I just couldn't wait! I'll do it some other time. I think someone else has mentioned this, but you seem to switch Michael's and Lucas' names. For example, in this sentence: " While walking behind them to the car Michael turned around and smiled at me and said, “You’ll have a lot of fun. I promise.” " Erm, I don't really think Michael could have done that, since this is from his point of view. : ) Anyway, this is one of the most interesting stories I've read. Having someone like Kara for a little sister seems kind of cool, but that's just me. I feel for Ichibod, though. Poor thing didn't deserve to get stepped on. -sob- : ) That's pretty much all I have to say. Please update soon!
Lilyness 2008-03-02 ch 7, anon.	abuseI always feel so bad for Micheal, it's like nothing is real to him. This style you are using is very interesting though, I must say. Plus, I love Anna. The End. (Sorry, you know how bad I am at reviews, ask me about it on msn and I can prolly say more.)

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