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| You'll.Never.Know 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abusePlease say you haven't completely abandoned this story. Because I love it :) |
| Lover of ALL Books 2008-04-13 ch 24, | abuseOk, I really hope you read this review! Update! I swear, are an amazing writer and I am completely hooked with your story. No, do not smile and then never think of this review again. I sit your but down and write SOMETHING! I understand how nice it is not to write anything for a while and it seems like you suddenly have a whole lot more time but NO, just update! |
| what's up world 2008-04-09 ch 24, | abuseDear Ollie May, this is a very concerned and very dedicated reader asking you from the deepest pits of her heart if you would be willing to update this story. Pretty please? I read through this whole story all at once from 11pm-2:44am.exactly. I really love the plot and especially the dynamics between Markus, Antony, and Lana. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update! Sincerely, a devoted reader |
| Efreisone 2008-04-08 ch 24, | abuseI'm obviously not the first person to tell you this, but apparently the message hasn't gotten through. So I'll take a stab at it: Update. PLEASE. This is one of the first stories I read when I came to fictionpress, and when I was clearing out some junk in my favorites I found this story. It was really familiar, but as you hadn't updated in quite a while (almost a year! And right before my birthday, too. Saddening, much?), I had to wonder why it was still favorited. So I reread the first chapter. And then the second chapter. And then before I knew it I was done with the entire story. Again. I knew why I hadn't deleted this story. It was because I loved it like I love cookies. It's practically necessary. The plot is engaging, the POV situation is refreshing, and the characters... wow. They're funny and quirky but they act like real people (just, more interesting, really). I mean, I don't think of Anthony and go "He's ripped! Commence drooling." I smile. Christ. So I had a good reason for holding onto this. But I am obviously a few digits short of a phone number, because I looked back at the "last updated" thing and was crushed. AGAIN. If this tragic story is not enough to bring back the writing bug, I don't know what is. So please, do us all a favor and get with the chapter-making! It is sorely needed. |
| dangerous attraction 2008-04-06 ch 24, | abuseAH! What the **? That was the last chapter! jkgal;g jekl;jal ;wfdl;jksjkl;fdk; j Argh. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SON! I love this story! |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseupdate soon! |
| One-Hand Clap 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseYou've got to update. And soon. |
| The Changeling 2008-03-29 ch 24, | abuseThis story is ha-ha-ha-larious, but it saddens me a lot to see you haven't updated in like a trillion years! Or nearly a year, anways... This story is probably one of the best I've read on this site so far, and I'm something of a connesiur - if I do say so myself. It's just really funny in all the right places, and the tentative, lovely friendship between Antony and Lana/Cara... Well, it's adorable. And I can't help myself. I want to shin Antony and carry him away on my shoulder to my cave... or something. I know, I know, and I've seen it happen time and time before: authors lose inspiration for a story or something, and suddenly you have a million abusive, self-entitled ** DEMANNDING you update. But I'm not an **. But I'm still asking very sweetly for an update in the near future, just because I love this story so much! And you've left it on tenterhooks... Well, not really, but I want to see what happens with Emo. And Jade. And Markus. But just, yeah. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update sometimes soon. I am on my virtual knees, virtually begging. There's probably a good reason why you haven't update but still... PLEASE. |
| M.A. Coyne 2008-03-29 ch 24, | abuseI love it! PLEASE CONTINUE! lol. I think I'm in love with the two brothers, haha. Although, I really wish Jade had stayed with Markus, I get the whole "finding The One" thing, and you played it out well. Good job! |
| Carina 2008-03-26 ch 24, anon. | abuseI'm so sad! I stumbled upon this gem of a story only to realize it is not finished and has not been updated in quite some time. In fact, I have noticed your stories haven't seen any action since September! Please, oh pretty please, continue soon! This is a great story! The writing is amazing. |
| DSLuverGurl123 2008-03-23 ch 24, | abuseHi. I just wanted to say that your story is amazing and I really hope you update soon! -Katherine |
| kATRINA 2008-03-19 ch 24, anon. | abuseDude such a great story!! Really and i love how the story is told by Lana telling a story. I can't wait til the next chapters come out! |
| that's way chill 2008-03-10 ch 24, | abuseah this story is **! please please please update soon. i cant wait to read more. im secretly pulling for lana and markus to end up together haha. |
| leemya 2008-03-09 ch 24, | abuseLove your story! Please continue writing. |
| silver 2008-02-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease updatee!! |