Great story perty gory.

omg I was so excited to see that you added some chapters, m'love! I absolutely love them! :) Oh, I'M REWRITING VIOLENT INSTINCTS. Full-blown re-write. Same over-all theme but there will be some differences.

wow this is pretty cool, update soon plz.

I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed sooner! I've just been away from the computer for the past few days. But here I am, and that's what counts, right? :) Amazing chapter. It was extremely well written, very flowing, nicely paced. Your descriptions are unbelievable. I love it! Update as soon as you can!

~carm~

This is a truly wonderful story. I like the way you narrate it; it's from a unique perspective and incredibly interesting to read. I can't wait to see what happens next!

~carm~

Awesome. Just... awesome. I love the characters and the gore and the... everything. I'd love to see more.

Oh, and Jess's description of Shawn in the second chapter? HAWT.

hey this story is excellent so far definately keep it up hun ;)

Best chapter so far. Yep. I'm loving this, Jellybean. I hope you comment on mine soon.

I thought your story was excellent. You really built up the characters and showed their own each individual opinion on things. You also made the drama surreal but, don't get me wrong, that makes the story very interesting and like real life. Keep it up. Major Kudos.