Me like the title. ^_^ It's very beautiful, actually. "I don't care if you're drunk with sadness -- It's all sunshine and light here," It's my favorite line. It's really a nice poem.


-C.N

I feel pleasure with you're downfall and tears... your

I like this... the italics are great and the whole thing is very powerful.. gret piece

I dont know what to say. The flow was beautiful and natural. And I didnt want to read anything the wrong way. And I dont do it, but I see you're point about people writing about something they dont or never have lived. Nice work.

I have so many friends who just sit there and act like they're poor, pitiful people. I hate that more than anything. This is a great poem.