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| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2006-09-20 ch 1,  | abuseI love the emotion in this, you can really feel it through the words |
| lackluster 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abusei don't know why but i love this. maybe it's the mix of candy in the first few words and anger/bitterness in the rest of the poem. i would never guess this was about friendship, had i not seen the category, that's for sure. and that makes it brilliant. |
| insanity by nightfall 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseTime changes things.Caramel - a good metaphor |
| klare 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abusei like it. only takes a second to read, and the impact is great. |