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| Promiscuous Geek 2006-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseWhere's the rest? lol JK. Fantabulous metaphors and similes! Creative and emotive as usual. Once again, I LOVE the title... Antelucan! lol Keep up the good work Goose! :) Oh and a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Welcome to the ranks of the 16 year olds. hehe |
| chiPocky 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. -smiles- I've always wanted to write descriptions as well as you do, but the words won't come. The colors in your writing are beautiful and fluid. I can easily immerse myself in the scene you painted. Excellent! |