Interesting indeed! What sort of a melody were you thinking of matching with it? And what is the song truly about? Definitely open to interpretation! I think you should add a few more verses, but otherwise, great start! x

I love it, and I can relate to it. I like writing poems that people can relate to, I want to kind of help them in a way, if that can help people. I don't know I'm starting to confuse me and probably you. I don't think it looks wierd and It's written just fine. I'll tell you what inspired me to write Alright in a e-mail.

this is a great song, very well written and thought out.

i want to thank you for reviewing my poem question, i really appreciate the input, it gives me a different perspective, i am a wiccan so i never understood exactly how your beliefs work. you feel the same about your god as i do about my goddess with only minor differences, thank you for the review.