oh so true, interconnected yet alone...

...separate pieces in a puzzle that is humanity.

simply said, but creates a sort of self stratified contentment.

Awesome write! Thank you for the kind review and keep up the great work.

nice work. don't stop thanks for the review.

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Very honest and true voice. Good work.

its good. couldn't really tell what it was about but maybe im just stupid that way(:-ga

last two lines were quite powerful... honest poem, one that many can relate to

good job :)