Just like sad stories

Dripped in ink onto paper

Left to unravel.

Gah! Imagery, imagery, imagery. And original too. :) Loved it. bella

Ohh, I love it! The image painted in my mind is stunning.

This haiku is as clear and fresh as a summer rainstorm! LoveANi

I like haiku - nice and short and simple.

I liked the simile of this poem, I'd never thought of it like that before. Nice job!

beautiful imagery

Very refreshing and well worded. Excellent job.

A nice and refreshing haiku, well done!