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black ennui
2007-04-22
ch 18,
abusenope, the plot wasn't confusing in this chapter..
though i got a bit lost at the conversation, as to who was saying what. (nothing that reading it again didn't fix, though. :p)
thanx for updating. :)
JustAFairyTale
2007-04-17
ch 17,
abusehey!! some people do still read this even though it has been a VERY long time since you updated it... just keep on updating okay?
black ennui
2007-04-17
ch 17,
abusestory's doing great, actually.
i'm just a bit confused, though.
i thought adam promised to be a better mate for her, so why is constantinople now with sir lykogus?
well, i guess i'll just find out in the next few chapters as the plot thickens and unveils.
good luck to the rest of the story!
Dragon of luck
2006-12-19
ch 14,
abuseThis is a very interesting story. It is a little hard to understand in some parts, but it really doesn't take away from the point. I hope you continue.
demonicfatality
2006-10-27
ch 14,
abuseYay! I'm so happy you decided to continue. :) I've only read one of your stories besides this one.. but I don't think they're that much alike. There are some simularities... but that's just your style of writing.
verifyme-22
2006-10-27
ch 14, anon.
abuseI like your story! Why doesn't Tristan understand that she loves him? I hated how he treated her.

Get them back together soon!
Antimony
2006-10-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh, she seems like a little brat!! No offence meant :P.. still it seems interesting..interesting enough to read further...
sailor_serena141
2006-10-26
ch 14, anon.
abuselove this story so please please update soon! yay fgor updates!
Aneedegorarose
2006-10-04
ch 13, anon.
abuseAH

...

AH I just read all of it and then that!Sucky end, this story is so good It's not even halfway (almost there but not quite) complete! I'm not one to talk as i never go past like one chapter but this is good! Your good! I love the character, I'm so in love with them all! And now I'm adding you to author Alert.. You better update or I'll cry!
demonicfatality
2006-09-12
ch 13,
abuseHey, we've all been there. Sometimes you have to set a story aside for a while and let it ferment. Hope to see something new from you soon and maybe a continuation of this one later on.
sailor_serena141
2006-09-12
ch 13, anon.
abuseno you cannot give up! i love this story and want you so much to keep writing it as i am enjoying it! please please keep writing and update soon as this is a brilliant story. please!
demonicfatality
2006-09-04
ch 12,
abuseHey, I've been waiting for this chapter! I'm glad you were able to break through your block, if only for a short chapter. :)
celestial tears
2006-08-28
ch 10,
abuseYour story is very interesting, plz keep updating.
demonicfatality
2006-08-10
ch 11,
abuseI'm sorry! I'll update soon, I promise. :) You're REALLY going to like the next chapter, me thinks. Well... I think a LOT of people will like the next chapter.

And... I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY. I think I've said something along those lines before... but... that's okay.

As for your writer's block, I think that's just going around. I have a mild case of it too at the moment. :(
demonicfatality
2006-08-06
ch 10,
abuseThis is getting better and better. I'm itching to know what happens next so please write quickly. :)

And I'm glad you're starting to like Armando. ^-^
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