OMG i can't believe i didnt read this story sooner. I love Grim and Graves and Xeraph and Jasper. BUt honestly Jasper has got to be my fave. I mean from naming Xeraphs migrane to trying to get him to kiss him...he's just so random and cute and hes a kitty! -snuggles Jasper- This is amazing. Poor Xeraph though...he really shouldn't get drunk should he?

Kin Inu

I think you mean 'Bollocks' not 'Bullocks' if Vincent is supposed to be British.

Oi,
Long time reader first time reviewer. I really have to hand it to you , you have a way with words. everything you write sounds so right.Its descriptive but i doesn't get boring after a while.Although you update once in a blue moon, it's always worth the wait. I was wondering if you could be my beta, if you have time. Because your style is just beyond this world.
Anyway i can't wait for your next update.
Thanks in advance.
Soda Brain.
P.S: Sorry for the spelling mistakes...That's why i need you.^^'

Wow took me forever to get to this chapter. I love long chapters though so no complaints. Quite some drama here - I was looking for any tiny hint that Vince was into Grim, but saw nothing there. In my opinion I think Vince holds back because Grim doesn't open up and prove he's not just a flirty kid.

I was really surprised at Xeraph. Though perhaps he just twisted his obvious care for Vince into something different cause of alcohol. Hm. As for Grim and Jasper, I understand them in a way, but don't agree to it. Jasper should've seriously listened to his partner (though I love Grim to death) and by doing what he did I think is a real slap to Xeraph's face. Vince seems too indifferent at this point for me to really think he's going to be jealous, but who knows. Grim only lies to him lately, 'specially when he said nothing was going on with Jasper. (not a way to get someone to open up to you xD )It seems Grim is farther away from winning his heart now then in any of the other chapters.

And I'm kind of glad for your writer's block. I can never read a sex scene when the two people I'm hoping will get together is with somebody else. Just cause I find it irrevelant anyway, unless something significant was to transpire during the event. Which is why I'm glad you only wrote about the before/aftermath with Grim and Jasper. Of course if the story was smut-derived, I'd be on the opposite end of the totem pole x)

Well can't wait to see what you've got planned for the next chapter. Sorry I wrote so much of my thoughts, but so much happened (and we're only on chapter four!) so I got a lot to say.

Please keep with this story, I really enjoy it. I love reading about the characters and their interaction with each other. It's fun and nail-biting to see how they react to every situation they're presented with.

Also, Vincent's cute. ^_^ Heh.

I have now just officially claimed this story to be one of the very best that I have ever read. I can not wait until you update the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

awesome story! the chapters are really long, but damn they're worth it! can't wait for the next chapter!

O_o Wow. A lot happened. Wow. Uhh...it was lots of fun to read! ^_^ So much crazy romance! Well, honestly, I was expecting Xeraph to eventually put some kinda moves on Vincent :P It seemed inevitable XD But still, that was quite crazy! And the car :P That amused me greatly. I thought Vincent was gonna try and elope with it... :P Oh, and more insight on Grim! Yay! I want to know what he did, though XP It's what started all his crazy mind stuff, yes? Hmm... Oh, dear, and Xeraph goes down again. It sounds like he's been possessed by whatever's in Grim's brain...then again, maybe not :P Still, he should learn to stay out of mad men's minds! 'Tis not healthy *shakes head*. Hee, looking forward to next chapter!!

OMG I LOVE GRIM…even though he’s a bit crazy and he's nineteen honestly I didn’t expect him to be nineteen, that was a mind exploding! And Vincent. I love his personality so much, He’s such a jerk! And Jasper is so cute!! ^_^ I LOVE YOUR STORY! But WOW. Your Chapters are soo long..but I like that, that means I have something to look forward to when I have nothing else to do.. Oh and the car…*drool* Yes, I’m a car fanatic…and motorcycles too. Now you must write more! And keep up the awesome work!

I have mentally decided to wait until you finish every chapter before I read this story again. I kinda forgot some parts of it and well, I haven't have the time to read it again. Hopefully in either case you update soon.

As to why I hate Jasper? Well, no reason except that I dont' really fancy this sort of characters. Either ways, hope you update soon.

ZL

Just to return the favor, here's a tiny mistype that I found:

As he bent to rummage through his bag, Xeraph sent is(his) partner an estranged look over the rims of his sunglasses, ...

I just adore this chapter! Totally never expected the scene between Xeraph and Vincent XD
A lot of tension and angst, I just love it! Will be waiting patiently for the next update, so keep up the good work.
This has got to be my favourite so far ;)

Ah, I loved this one! And it was MUCH easier to tell scary Grim in this one, so kudos on that. I'm glad you didn't make Xeraph and Vincent get it on, I would've been depressed. I don't even know why...oh well, I've never claimed to be easy to read. xD

I LOVE Jasper. I mean, I remember a couple of years ago I thought the whole yaoi fangirl thing was creepy, but I've been turned! It's kind of sad, my descent. Anyway, I bet he's everyones favorite, combination of kitty/albino/slut that he is!
I will draw him for you, but my scan sucks ass, so I maybe not be able to actually get him to you... Anyway, this one was more of a filler, right? I will wait for your next one, even if it's a whole year. xD

My freaking god!! This was uber long! I wanted to faint at the length. No way was I going to get through all of that in one day! So I split it up. Now that you know how I read your cahpter I guess you're waiting for the critiques?

Um yeah, wicked long chapter, kind of got a little boring in parts, especially when they paragraphs tended to be more character thoughts rather than dialogue or action. Sorry but it happens sometimes! And having no idea what happened last time? Yeah that kind of didn't help. Seriously, you need to do a little recap at the beginning of each chapters or else no one knows what happened previously and it's not like i can just go back a chapter and re-read it or else it would take me twice as long to get a review out.

Ugh I just want Vincent to accept Grim and Xeraph to just get together with Jasper. When is it going to happen!! Is there anything at all that Vincent likes about Grim? Or is there absolutely no hope for Grim? Will you ever write a romance story where the main characters actually become a couple without all this angst?! I feel like I'm drowning in the angst! Wa! Help I'm drowning! Actually that would be an interesting picture to say the least. What would angst look like? Water?

Hmm, have you drawn a picture of Jasper and Xeraph yet? That would be a good one. Hint hint, draw Jasper and Xeraph. Please?!

I love how you didn't even know what happened last chapter when you replied to my review. Made me chuckle. Um, what exactly are Grim and Graves going to be working on right now? This chapter seemed to be a lot of character work and not a ton of plot? Well, there was plot but only character based, if that makes sense? Yes? No? Okay.

Hm, not much else to say other than updating sometime in the relatively near future would be amazing, but I know, life stresses people out, it happens. Hahha, well get back to me about drawings on deviant if you feel the need to.


vampgurl99

it's too bad about the length between updates. i don't think i'm a patient reader. but since i just found this, i guess i haven't had to suffer yet. i have to say i absolutely adore this. your writing is - brilliant. & your chapter length? ohmygod. /love/ it. grim is wonderful, haha. do update a little sooner? lol.