very beautiful. i see not one flaw.

I’ve read some of your other poems and I think you're very talented.

I like how you convey your point through simple, potent words and make them seem so beautiful at the same time :] I really enjoyed reading your stuff

i like this. the feeling in the words is utterly breathtaking.

i read the poem before i glanced at the title & i gotta say, it's a perfect title. this poem is also really good. i like the way it's set. the moon, the ocean(?), it's pretty... and i like the last line. this was nicely written.

this is so wrenching, you just tear up reading it. And we've all had these notions before, where everything celestial seems so immaculate...awesome. *adds to fave stories* `~bella~`

i really like that :)

very koolio :p