It's so sad. I'm not kidding. I like title. (Kumo is cloud, right? I'm not sure about Ito...) It's beautiful. Like a never-ending journey.

-C.N

Now this is really good. I loved the last line. It flowed very well. It's nice, to say the least.

*Chess

itd be nice if you translated the title for us... i like this.. its sad and beautiful.. th way you descrobe things is awesome