 Slightly Ajar 2009-02-14 . chapter 1Aw, that is adorable. I loved it the whole way through. I made me sad, but it was written so incredibly well that all the feelings were pulled off flawlessly. Wonderfully written! |
 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-07-14 . chapter 1oh my god
im like
crying
this is so unhappy! WHY MUST IT BE?
your awesome
ciao
Sam |
 anon 2008-07-01 . chapter 1 This is honestly one of the most touching stories I have ever read. You wouldn't believe how hard I was crying throughout. It breaks my heart, but your story is still brilliant and perfect. |
 Omok 2008-02-27 . chapter 1Wow. =) *tires to think of something smart to say*...*okay, bad idea, i'm not smart in the first place, so -__-;*
humm...
great story! sad,its only an one shot ._. and sad...callie...couldn't return the feelings >_> |
 diamondforever 2007-01-05 . chapter 1That was painful, but so heartfelt. I think it's what a lot of friends might go through. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
 mcdoh1902 2006-07-11 . chapter 1I'm not really good with criticism, but some is better than nothing, so bear with me here?
I liked the way it was narrated, like the point of view. It's so full of nostalgia, like the way we want things to be when we recall them, and the characters are rather fine. Their pain, it shows. |